Hi.
Your program seems basically to do exactly what you want - connect to another computer and recieve data from another program running on that computer. it needs some refining and if you want to send data, you need to use the Write TCP VI as well as the Read TCP VI.
If you want your communication loop to be connected to your other loop, there are various ways, the simplest being local variables. There are examples in the example finder (Click Help>>Find Examples) that do this and there are tutorials on this site which explain it (search for "TCP + tutorial"). These examples and tutorials can be modified to suit your needs. If you still have a problem after using them, I suggest you open a new thread and ask the question there with more details. There will be a higher chance of someone answering your question.
And by the way, your communication over the LAN isn't serial, but ethernet (TCP/IP).
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